Sunday 24 April 2011

Side Plot - POV of the Private Eye

Cool idea of the bank heist and then the car chase Dave, lots of action and excitement! Plus, their bank heist could be really sneaky like one of John Dillinger's heists.

I had the idea of a side story from the POV of a private detective, it would ultimately end with him being killed by the Mob because he knows too much. But the story would take place in his apartment before his assassination and he'd be telling the story of the bank heist to the audience.

1 comment:

  1. Yes, yes at last we are piecing together a story i love it cant wait to discuss it further tomorrow i shall inform of my arrival from the never world of the force.

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