Story update on Red

I have now cut my story from 16 to 12 pages and i am no longer doing a double page spread for the car chase sequence so that wont cause problems that would hamper the indesign process. Also the death of the bank clerk is cut out and the whole thing where the clerk sets the alarm off during the robbery and the argument between big six and dint as those parts arent necessary to the story and probably slows it down. So im back on course baby!